Tuesday 12 May 2015

My First Narrative

Stuck in the Ice

Aaa!!!  I woke up yelling “we are stuck in the middle of ice!”suddenly the volcano erupts.
Aaa!!!Even though I was strong and tough I began yelling and screaming. “Help! Help! someone. Anyone.” Just then the lava hit the ice and
the ice started breaking up. “What are we going to do?” asked James. Tommy spoke loudly, “we should just wait because the ice is breaking so we will be able to move.
The ice slowly started to break away. When it was all broken up we crawled away. We found some wood and built a raft and sailed away. We  all lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. Wow you built a raft just like Bear Gryills how cool Bubba :-)

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